아이엘츠 라이팅 예문 보기 IELTS 출제 문제와 샘플 라이팅

아이엘츠 공부하시는 분들 중 라이팅을 힘들어하시는 분들이 참 많습니다. 라이팅은 한글 라이팅을 쓸 때도 그렇듯 자주 쓰면서 실력을 늘릴 수밖에 없는데 막연히 무엇을 어떻게 써야 할지 모를 때 가장 좋은 방법은 바로 샘플 라이팅을 자주 필사 하면서 자기 라이팅 스타일로 흡수시키는 것입니다. 

 

아래의 아이엘츠 라이팅 예문은 기존 출제된 문제로서 답변도 함께 제시되어 있으니 모범 답안을 참고 함께 보실까요. 

Task 1 Sample

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Revenue Sources and Expenditures of a USA Charity in one year, 2016.

Model Answer

The pie charts show the amount of revenue and expenditures in 2016 for a children’s charity in the USA. Overall, it can be seen that donated food accounted for the majority of the income, while program services accounted for the most expenditure. Total revenue sources just exceeded outgoings.

In detail, donated food provided most of the revenue for the charity, at 86%. Similarly, with regard to expenditures, one category, program services, accounted for nearly all of the outgoings, at 95.8%. 

The other categories were much smaller. Community contributions, which were the second largest revenue source, brought in 10.4% of overall income, and this was followed by program revenue, at 2.2%. Investment income, government grants, and other income were very small sources of revenue, accounting for only 0.8% combined.

There were only two other expenditure items, fundraising and management and general, accounting for 2.6% and 1.6% respectively. The total amount of income was $53,561,580, which was just enough to cover the expenditures of $53,224,896. 

(161 Words)

 

* expenditures = 비용 

* Overall, = 대체로 

* Accounted = 간주되다 여겨지다 

* In detail = 상세하게 

Comments

The response achieves the task because the data from the pie chart is selected and summarised appropriately.

Also, it can be seen that comparisons are made, which you are told to do in the rubric. The comparisons are clear from language such as 'similarly', 'much smaller', and 'largest revenue source'. Those are all language of comparison and contrast. The summary is also well-organised. The writer decides first to compare the two largest items in each pie chart in the first paragraph, then go on to summarise the smaller items of expenditure, each in a separate paragraph.

 

It is therefore easy to follow the description.

There is not one right way to organise the pie chart. You could for example discuss each chart in turn as they are about different categories.

 

답안 샘플과 함께 왜 위의 라이팅이 좋은 답안인가를 설명하는 코멘트도 함께 남겨 두었으니 참고하세요. 제가 추천 하는 방법 중 하나는 자신이 한번 꼭 써보라는 것입니다. 그리고 필사도 해보시고요. 그냥 읽는 것과 직접 써보는 것엔 큰 차이가 있습니다. :) 

 

그럼 영어공부와 관련된 또 다양한 콘텐츠를 가지고 찾아올께요! 좋은 하루 보내세요 :)

 

 

영국 영어 공부 opinion pollster, misfire, figure (something) out, blank cheque, laser-like, stark 뜻

 

 

[영어 단어 및 영어 표현 ] 크리스마스 관련 영어단어들 및 뜻 총정리

 

 

영어 단어 paradox, conundrum, increase/grow by a factor of, silver bullet, slippery slope, open the door to 뜻